Friday, November 21, 2008

Haiku Friday 11/21/08

Haiku Friday
俳句の金曜日

Old place once called home
built into something diff'rent
helps cement goodbye

15 comments:

  1. This could almost be a haiku about me! I am in the process of packing boxes for moving! Not fun! Good one!

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  2. Lovely sentiment! And so true. Closure can be such a good thing...

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  3. I love how simple, sweet and sentimental this is! Good job and have a good weekend!

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  4. How is it you manage to cram so much into three short lines?

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  5. And the cement sets
    Around some new memories
    A new place called home


    Love to you, Maggie!

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  6. You really feel the melancholy and the hope--wonderful haiku.

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  7. I know what you mean.
    Beautiful 'ku!

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  8. Extremely well written!
    I'll be thinking about that all day.

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  9. It's always sad to move and leave one home, but always fun and exciting to find a new one...

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  10. Why do you think that you are not rich when you can write such haiku?

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  11. Very well said in just 3 lines.

    I hope everything is going well.

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