Saturday, November 08, 2008

Haiku Friday 11/7/08

Haiku Friday
俳句の金曜日

Anticipation
colors all things good or bad
painting life vibrant.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

(i'll awake, my love
stretch, yawn, savor my sweet dream...
then smile that you're real)


18 comments:

  1. Aw, after all that worrying, you came up with a super great haiku for today!

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  2. I notice you're not sharing the dream.

    But a lovely Haiku, nonetheless. You are SO GOOD at haiku - are you sure you're not some reincarnated Japanese person?

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  3. Is eveyone who was in Japan start to feel beauty like you?:)))

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  4. Really liked your 'ku this week! Keep up the good work!!!!

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  5. YAY!!! I love this one! It makes me so happy. And happy for you! :)

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  6. When dream becomes reality.....

    Nice job, Maggie.

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  7. Wow, very nice 'Ku. I read your website page on your Mom. MY Mom used to sign "Bushel and a Peck" to me, my sister, and all of her Grandkids as well. I sing that song to my babies!

    Thank you for your comment. Jarring.....that is a perfect word for how it feels on the days I really think about it- (everyday)

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  8. I jst found your blog via Huckdolls list. Your poem here spoke to me. Excellent, beautiful and elegant. Very nice!

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  9. Haiku and I do not mesh. But this, I loved.

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  10. beautiful haiku maggie! that last part made me all teary!

    such is that future that's coming so soon!

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