Friday, January 09, 2009

Haiku Friday 1/9/09

Haiku Friday
俳句の金曜日

Love breeds love, my love
upwardly spirals passion
feeding on itself.

Logs longest burning
are the hottest and the heart
of a glowing fire.

Kindling's best friend is
an open conversation
hearts, minds meet again.

More kindling on top
keeps the passion growing strong
as old ignites new.

As new twigs of now
become part of fire's core then
sands of time stand still...

...waves of heat quiver
blurring breathing, curling toes
shimmering inside...

...wake up more in love
craving more talk and more touch
delicious cycle.

Love breeds love, my love
upwardly spirals passion
feeding on itself.

26 comments:

  1. LOVE it. You have a knack for the Haiku. I don't think I could do one, but perhaps one day I'll try. I hope your enjoying your delicious cycle.

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  2. great Haiku Maggie. I just love reading your post.

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  3. Well, this inspired me to appreciate the end of today when CB comes home after a week of being away, to be much more appreciative that he's back.

    Good 'ku.

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  4. I'm so happy for you Maggie!! You're so much in love!!
    This haiku is one of the best I have read lately, from you or anyone!!!

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  5. Oh how much I love this, Maggie-dear!!

    It's perfect. You should write it and give it framed to your love.

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  6. wow--great haiku. love the fire imagery. you can just feel your happiness!

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  7. Wow. Wow. And at the risk of sounding stupid. Wow.

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  8. My heart leaped with smiles reading this.. loved it.

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  9. Well it sounds like the end to the apartness is going very well! :)
    What a lovely haiku. I love it! :)

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  10. I just don't have the words today to tell you how beautiful that haiku is. I always look forward to reading your haiku every Friday, and I'm so glad every week that I read them.

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  11. Fantastic Maggie! I really enjoyed this haiku. But then I always enjoy all yours.

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  12. Lovely, Maggie. I like the image of the fire that builds and grows -- rather than Romeo and Juliet's passion: "like fire and powder, which, as they kiss, consume."

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  13. Dropping by from sits. Sending some sunshine your way. Beautiful sentiment!

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  14. I agree with Jennifer. That was HOT!

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  15. Thanks for stopping by my blog! Love your Haiku. I was never any good at them - yours is great!

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  16. What joy in your Haiku! I'm happy for you in your togetherness.
    Hugs and blessings,

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  17. *fans self* WARM! *Fans self more* VERY WARM! *mops brow* NEED SHOWER NOW (Well, either that or a woman and I have none handy at the moment)

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  18. Maggie, I love your Haiku! (I couldn't write one for the life of me!) I always look forward to reading them on Fridays.

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  19. I'm so happy for you guys! Glad you're back together again!

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  20. Seriously, you write the best haikus!

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